Talk:Cambridge Spa is raided

Creating the raid in Cambridge Spa

Creating the raid in the spa of Cambridge, Ontario, Canada page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 17:35, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Added the broken source templates

Added the broken source templates until edited and revised. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 15:59, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Review of revision 4776535 [Not ready]

Revision 4776535 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:09, 17 April 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Nope Comments by reviewer: Needs loads of work. Back up, take a breath and go again, please. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4776535 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:09, 17 April 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Nope Comments by reviewer: Needs loads of work. Back up, take a breath and go again, please. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Do not delete old dates and add the words "days ago" and "days later"

Do not delete the old dates when the words "days ago" and "days later" is added. 2607:FEA8:1F1D:8400:E16F:1BC:E317:D8D9 (talk) 19:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Revised when submitted to avoid stale or old dates

Revising when submitted to avoid stale or old dates. 2607:FEA8:1F1D:8400:E16F:1BC:E317:D8D9 (talk) 19:07, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Revised with two sources and styles

Revised with two sources and styles in the raid of Cambridge Spa. 2607:FEA8:1F1D:8400:E16F:1BC:E317:D8D9 (talk) 19:44, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Tasks

• In order to ensure neutral point of view, two sources from two different, independent providers is necessary. WN:NPOV provides further detail.
• Grammar problems should be corrected. For example, the first sentence has an ambiguous subject, is missing an article before the phrase 'human trafficking investigation.' WN:STYLE provides further detail.
• There are two stories discussed that are not related to each other: the Cambridge spa and FunGuyz magic mushrooms. The magic mushrooms story does not support the headline. WN:STYLE#Headlines provides further detail.
• The article is officially abandoned (four days without any meaningful edits). It should be edited to avoid deletion. WN:PROD provides further detail.

Michael.C.Wright (^Talk/_Published) 22:41, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Adding additional sources and styles

Adding additional sources and styles in news page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 14:12, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Review of revision 4777399 [Not ready]

Revision 4777399 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:30, 24 April 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Major problems Comments by reviewer: Style-wise, I think this article is getting worse. It may be time to roll off of this one, and re-focus on something else. We are on the edge in terms of freshness. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4777399 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:30, 24 April 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Major problems Comments by reviewer: Style-wise, I think this article is getting worse. It may be time to roll off of this one, and re-focus on something else. We are on the edge in terms of freshness. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Adding one more sources and adding more styles

Adding one more sources and adding more styles. Make sure you don't submit for review because of vandalism. Use easy peer review without vandalizing anything in Kitchener raiding Cambridge Spa page. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 14:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC)

When revising with this tag and adding one more source, but it's take too long to publish

When revising with this tag and adding one more source, but it's take too long to publish. @Bddpaux I will help you how to publish Cambridge Spa articles but not abandoned articles and @Michael.C.Wright I will publish your article but not minimal articles. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 15:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Adding words representing "days ago, yesterday, and today" instead of dates because stale dates is appearing in this article

Adding words representing "days ago, yesterday, and today" instead of dates because stale dates is appearing in this article. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 15:54, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Removing stale dates and days ago, yesterday, and today and adding the current dates

Removing stale dates and days, ago, yesterday, and today and adding the current dates. 199.212.250.163 (talk) 16:04, 30 April 2024 (UTC)